Past the others I will zoom.
Many love to watch me scoot.
Quickly speeding in my dream.
Riding in my full costume,
leather jacket and snake-skin boot.
Some consider too extreme.
Racing leads to other's gloom.
My winning, there is no dispute.
Once again I reign supreme!
J.A.Scott
I like the changes you made from the original. The snake skin boots line helps me see your dream. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rachel. I thought the poem needed another line.
DeleteI like the changes you made from the original. The snake skin boots line helps me see your dream. :-)
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