Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Racing Dream

Past the others I will zoom.
Many love to watch me scoot.
Quickly speeding in my dream.

Riding in my full costume,
leather jacket and snake-skin boot.
Some consider too extreme.

Racing leads to other's gloom.
My winning, there is no dispute.
Once again I reign supreme!

J.A.Scott

3 comments:

  1. I like the changes you made from the original. The snake skin boots line helps me see your dream. :-)

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    1. Thanks Rachel. I thought the poem needed another line.

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  2. I like the changes you made from the original. The snake skin boots line helps me see your dream. :-)

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